STD wording ... how does this sound?

[Danielle9608]

My next DIY project is be my save the dates. I ordered some a long time ago for our engagement party. Since we had such a long engagement people would keep asking "did you set a date?" Even after I had already told them. So I ordered these from vista print (designed them myself) to hand out at the party. I ordered extra so I could use them later as the actual save the dates. The back is blank. How does this wording sound for the back:

Our day is fast approaching,
And we can hardly wait!
We hope that you can join us.
Be sure to save the date!
Danielle & Jonathan
Will be married on
September 6, 2008
Red Jacket Resort
1 South Shore Drive
South Yarmouth, MA 02664
(800) 672-0500 | (508) 398-6941
For your convince rooms have been reserved at a special rate for you at the Red Jacket Resort. Please mention the Richard/Frappier wedding when you make your reservations.


Invitation to follow



This is what the STD look like:
http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff190/danielle9608/IMG_4568.jpg

[smileyone2002]

I think that is perfect! I love the front of these!

[StarCoveter]

Just a quick thing here: on the wording that you typed out here, you said "convince" instead of "convenience"... hope that didn't show up on the real STD

Other than that, those are so cute!

[Danielle9608]

i haven't printed the back yet. Thanks for picking that up :)

[StarCoveter]

i haven't printed the back yet. Thanks for picking that up :)

Shew!!!! :lafhard:

[erika85]

I love the wording!!! They are going to look great!:whoohoo:

[exoduslaughin]

Those look great, and the wording is really cute.

[Custom Wedding Stamps]

Very very nice it says it all and I think the card itself is beautiful you did a really great job! Good luck