Help! Invitation Wording....

[smileyone2002]

I was wondering if this is too short and informal. I made our wedding inviatitons and the spot where this goes isnt very big so i didnt want it to be very long, but just tell me what you ladies think...if I can improve and such.

We decided on forever...
and forever begins when we
Allyson Whalen
and
Charles Lindberg
get married
on June 28th, 2008
at 4 o clock
First Baptist Church

Reception Immediatly Following

The only thing I dont know about it the "Get married" part, it just sounds so blah to me.

[WendyNC]

how about

"Are married" or

"Are united in marriage"

[shawnsgirl]

I agree united in marriage or pledge our love to one another..

[bichonlvr]

I agree OR.... excange wedding vows!

Very cute wording!

[smileyone2002]

Thanks ladies:rassberry: Those really helped:whoohoo:

[WebLady]

How about something more like this ...

"We decided on forever;
and forever begins today"

Allyson Whalen
and
Charles Lindberg

We hope you will share our love
and happiness as we wed.

June 28th, 2008
at 4 o clock
First Baptist Church

Reception Immediatly Following

[smileyone2002]

Thats even better!! Thanks a lot :heart:

[bradysmommy2007]

cute ideas....love the wording but iagree about the get married part..what about

We decided on forever...
and forever begins when we
Allyson Whalen
and
Charles Lindberg
are united as one
on June 28th, 2008
at 4 o clock
First Baptist Church

or
"become one"

[TangoWedding]

Just another idea to toss out...ours says:

It's with great joy that we
Cindy Darlene and Jeremy Kent
invite you to share with us
a celebration of love
as we exchange marriage vows
and begin our new life together

Date...time...place...

[BnB]

What about, just :

wed

since you're keeping it short and sweet

[smileyone2002]

These are all great ideas ladies! Thanks:whoohoo:

[Ryan James]

This gives me some ideas on what to write on my invitation. Hope that would be alright from everyone. I'm too blunt with flowery words and this will surely suggestions would really help.

Good luck with your wedding and best wishes to both of you!