Help me with invitation wording Please!

[bnd94]

OK I can't figure out how to do a poll so I will just give you the three I have and if anyone has any suggestions on a better way to word it please let me know. I need to work in that this will be a very casual reception.

Ok first off is 6 o'clock considered afternoon or evening? I just noticed I have afternoon but shouldn't it be evening?:confused: Also two of them are the same the only thing different is I wrote out the words for the date instead of just the numbers. I was trying to make it more informal and casual.

Also the location is going to be under the pavillion at the ballfield in Belvidere. How do I word that. Just like I did or is there a better way?

THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR HELP!!!:D


1.

No hill too steep, no trail too long,
to stop our love from growing strong.

Please join us
For a celebration of love, friendship, laughter and family
At the wedding reception of

Becky Marie
&
Danny Dean

On Saturday September 30th, 2006
At 6 o’clock in the afternoon

Location?


2.

No hill too steep, no trail too long,
to stop our love from growing strong.

Come join us for an evening of fun
To celebrate the marriage of

Becky Marie
&
Danny Dean

On Saturday September 30th, 2006
At 6 o’clock in the afternoon

Location?
3.



No hill too steep, no trail too long,to stop our love from growing strong.

Come join us for an evening of fun








To celebrate the marriage of

Becky Marie
&
Danny Dean


On Saturday, the thirtieth of September two thousand and six
At six o’clock in the afternoon

Location?

[LaceyinPgh]

Six o'clock is considered evening. As for your location I would say "At the Belvidere Ballfield Pavilion". By they way, I like #2.

[usahgrad]

I like the first one. 6 o'clock is in the evening and I think you should write out the date. Other than that, it looks beautiful!

[ikkin510]

OK, I agree with the 6o'clock in the evening and they way Lacey wrote the location. As for which one I like better, well, the date written out is more common, but if you want somethign really informal, I like the date with the numbers, but that's just me!!!

[Tiggerprincess]

OK, I agree with the 6o'clock in the evening and they way Lacey wrote the location. As for which one I like better, well, the date written out is more common, but if you want somethign really informal, I like the date with the numbers, but that's just me!!!
Me too its a perfect time..

[usahgrad]

You're right...and that's entirely up to you. I have to say that I LOVE that verse!

[bnd94]

Thank you all!

I liked the second one the best myself. I will definetly change the afternoon to evening.:D

I think the date written out looks nicer too, but I worry that it will make the person feel like it is a more formal affair. I would be happy if everyone showed up in everyday clothes. Nothing fancy.

[ikkin510]

This is just a thought, but maybe you could put that in the invite, about it being casual. Somethign like Please join us for a casual evening of fun. Thank may sound a litle wierd though. But it's an idea.

[Tiggerprincess]

This is just a thought, but maybe you could put that in the invite, about it being casual. Somethign like Please join us for a casual evening of fun. Thank may sound a litle wierd though. But it's an idea.
no not wierd at all...not a bad idea!!!!!!!!

[bnd94]

This is just a thought, but maybe you could put that in the invite, about it being casual. Somethign like Please join us for a casual evening of fun. Thank may sound a litle wierd though. But it's an idea.

Oh no I like that! I think I will do that. Thank you!:D

[Tiggerprincess]

Oh no I like that! I think I will do that. Thank you!:D
Me too.Thanx Nikki

[bnd94]

LOL! I just noticed when I went to add casual that I had written an evening of fun but in the afternoon near the end!! At least I got it right in one spot! LOL!:bblol:

[Tiggerprincess]

LOL! I just noticed when I went to add casual that I had written an evening of fun but in the afternoon near the end!! At least I got it right in one spot! LOL!:bblol:
LOL...U trippin me out!!!

[rainbowtreat]

Good luck Becky you will get it and I agree with every one else. It sounds really nice.

[bnd94]

Ok here it is re-written:

No hill too steep, no trail too long,

to stop our love from growing strong.


Come join us for a casual evening of fun
To celebrate the marriage of

Becky Marie
&

Danny Dean


On Saturday September 30th, 2006
At 6 o’clock in the evening
Under the pavilion at the Ballfield in Belvidere.

[Tiggerprincess]

Ok here it is re-written:
No hill too steep, no trail too long,
to stop our love from growing strong.

Come join us for a casual evening of fun
To celebrate the marriage of

Becky Marie

&
Danny Dean

On Saturday September 30th, 2006
At 6 o’clock in the evening
Under the pavilion at the Ballfield in Belvidere.


Perfect!!!!!!!!!! Looks great!!!

[bnd94]

I'm not real in love with the word fun in there. Does anyone have any suggestions? Nothing sounds quite right.

Also if you got this in the mail would you assume that we are already married and you are being invited to the reception, not the ceremony?

[Tiggerprincess]

I'm not real in love with the word fun in there. Does anyone have any suggestions? Nothing sounds quite right.

Also if you got this in the mail would you assume that we are already married and you are being invited to the reception, not the ceremony?
True..TRy the word Celebration..

[ikkin510]

I think it sounds like it's just the reception. I'll have to think on another word for fun and get back to you.

[rainbowtreat]

I was thinking maybe do


No hill too steep, no trail too long,
to stop our love from growing strong.

Come join us for a casual evening of celebration
as


Becky Marie
&
Danny Dean

Become Husband and Wife

On Saturday September 30th, 2006
At 6 o’clock in the evening
Under the pavilion at the Ballfield in Belvidere





Just an idea. Good luck
Did I mention my sons middle name is Dean, we call him by this name, actually he got it from me, it is also my middle name, yeah I know Gwen Dean lol blame my mom if you dont like it lol, also my daughter is Jessa Jason, we gave her her dads name as her middle name, i like it i dont care what eny one says lol, so my girl got dads name and my boy got moms name lol

[usahgrad]

Instead of fun maybe spirits or joy...I looked it up in the thesaurus and couldn't find something that sounded real great either. It's kind of a hard word to replace in that situation. Maybe just a casual evening...

I think it sounds like it's just a reception. It is very beautiful wording.

[bnd94]

I was thinking maybe do



No hill too steep, no trail too long,
to stop our love from growing strong.

Come join us for a casual evening of celebration
as




Becky Marie

&
Danny Dean

Become Husband and Wife

On Saturday September 30th, 2006
At 6 o’clock in the evening
Under the pavilion at the Ballfield in Belvidere





Just an idea. Good luck
Did I mention my sons middle name is Dean, we call him by this name, actually he got it from me, it is also my middle name, yeah I know Gwen Dean lol blame my mom if you dont like it lol, also my daughter is Jessa Jason, we gave her her dads name as her middle name, i like it i dont care what eny one says lol, so my girl got dads name and my boy got moms name lol




That does sound good but it sounds more like they are invited to the ceremony and the reception, but thank you. I always call Dan Danny Dean when he is doing something he shouldn't. Which sometimes is quite often! LOL! I like it as your middle name and I think it is great you kinda started a tradition with your daughter. I like it!:D

[rainbowtreat]

OOOps sorry about that I forgot for a min. that it is just the reception you invations are for. Maybe you can use wording like , help us celebrate our new life as husband and wife. Yours I think it work just fine. It sounds realy nice. Good luck with what ever you decide on.